Monday, October 17, 2016
mighty T.N.T Herewini WARRIOR
A long time ago there lived a boy and his name was Jeffry but most people would call him Jeff. One time Jeff was walking to School and while he was walking to school he heard weird noises every time he would walk past a lady's there would be weird scratching noises and some times he would hear screams. Jeff also had to go get his friends on the way to school. One day Jeff invited his friends over for a sleep over but when they walked past the old ladies house, they saw a big spider in her house.
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Herewini, you have written a very correct story with full stops, capital letters and commas, well done. When you only have 100 words you have to make every word count. When writing narratives don't worry about telling the reader what is happening, just jump straight into the action of the story. A great start Herewini,
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