Thursday, November 17, 2016

Herewini The Robot

There was a really  big BOOM and a very big CRASH as a the robot crashed into the moon with his really bulky spaceship and when the robot had got out of his spaceship the robot had seen a whole of aliens but he had to complete the mission that the president gave him. The president gave him the mission to save the world because the robot was indestructible and the aliens will destroy the world but the robot had to sneak past all the aliens and he completed the mission. The president was very happy for the brave robot.

1 comment:

  1. Hi Herewini, what a great post!I liked how you used boom and crash in big bold letters, it made me read it out loud, but next time could you use some more full stops and a few commas?
    keep up the good work from Briar

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